The line graph depicts the number of older people at the age of 65 and above from three nations including Japan, Sweden and the USA since 1940 and forecasts trends until 2040. The unit is measured in percentage.
Overall, it is evident that all figures for the elderly in the surveyed countries have experienced an upward trend and are predicted to keep rising in the future.
As can be seen from the graph, in the year 1940, the percentage of the aging citizens in the USA was 8%, taking a lead among all the countries and being followed by that in Sweden and Japan which were 6% and 5% respectively. During the first 40 years, a slight decrease of 2% was witnessed in the figures for Japan whereas that for the USA and Sweden rose at the identical rate with a gap of 2% each.
The other period observed Sweden surpass the USA in terms of the elderly population in 2000. Besides, in 2020, the proportion of the USA's residents in old age was 15%, twice as many as that of Japan with 7.5%. There is an expectation that Japan would take the lead of the USA in the rate of 65-year-old-and-older country dwellers after a dramatic growth from 8% in early 2020 to 27% in 2040.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Sweden) must be used with a third-person verb: 'surpasses'.
Suggestion: surpasses
...ch. The other period observed Sweden surpass the USA in terms of the elderly populat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44700460829 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56280866971 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566820276498 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3205113613 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177597263105 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722136770468 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641045600071 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106695011885 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579956169893 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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