The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph provides information about the increasing percentage of 65 and over aged people in Japan, Sweden and the USA.
Overall, it indicates that, the population of senior citizen, in all three different countries is expected to reach over 25% in 2040. Since 1940 to 2000, Sweden and the USA had a similar figure. From there, both were divided in different way. Around 2030 to 2040 again these will have same pattern to grasp 25%. Moreover, between 1940 to about 2017 Japan had been shown under 5% ratio, although will gradually go up in 2030, which will significantly raise and hit to almost 27% in 2040.
In 1940, the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and almost 9% in the USA. While the percentage for the western countries grew to around 15% in about 1990, the pattern for Japan dipped to 2.5% before rising to more than 5% at the present year (2018).
From 2020 to 2030, in Japan elderly people population will steadily grow but percentage will rapidly go up to 25%. In comparison, Sweden and the USA will show quite less ratio ( more or less 25%) in 2040.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'patterned'.
Suggestion: patterned
...2030 to 2040 again these will have same pattern to grasp 25%. Moreover, between 1940 to...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n and the USA will show quite less ratio more or less 25% in 2040.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38922581603 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.010593902 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232034762687 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904790662518 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677814924608 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133178004489 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529797101413 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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