The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of population aged 65 and over in Japan ,Sweden and USA over a period of 100 years, from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, it is clear that the number of elderly increase significantly throughout the time shown. Another noticeable that Japanese is deemed to be become a country that has the highest percentage of people who are 65 over over.
In the year 1940 ,the proportion of population in Japan was the lowest proportion with just stood at 5%. By contrast, the population of Sweden was totally higher than that of Japanese around 2% and the figure in USA was nearly twice times, compared with the population in Japan at the same time. Over the following 20 years, the number of Japanese had a sight decrease and relative stable remained before it rose sharply in 1980. The number of people aged 65 and over in USA and Sweden continuous increased by the time until in 1980.
In 1980, the proportion of population went up close to 10% in 2020 and its peak the point at approximately 27% at the end of period. In 1980, USA and Sweden had the percentage of population at nearly the same. USA people who was 65 or older kept this amount until in 2020, before went up to nearly 25%. Similarly, the percentage of population in Sweden ended at the point just over 25%, higher than that of USA.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Suggestion: over
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54393305439 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51827236386 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47280334728 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9180699426 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7272727273 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219079035266 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957861877165 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847188159144 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166027618026 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945770627276 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.