In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?
In some nations, especially in developed countries ,lonely person is becoming popular than in some decades ago. And I personally believe that it has some drawbacks.
An individual living alone has many various problems ,particularly for those who are old. The first problem is that no one shares the money paid monthly . For example, my brother used to have a roommate and they often shared the money bill for rent house, electricity, water consumption so each of them could earn an amount of money in their budget .But when his roommate moved out, he has to pay all the money and then his budget is limited. Another negative situation is people will feel up sad, lonely and no one takes care them when they get sick ,especially for those who are old. They will suffer from various health issues and that is so dangerous when they live alone.
On the other hand, living alone also brings some positive developments such as the skill to control lifestyles, schedule your time, freedom with life and also do everything you want in your resident. For example, I really like to decorate my house. So if I live alone ,I can decorate anything for it without asking someone else. Another point that is person who lives alone can be able to become more independence person than those who live with family. They have to learn how to manage their time schedule,pay the bill ,ask help from neighbor or even know how to fix some equipments in house.
In conclusion, more and more likely to live alone and in my opinion, I believe that it can brings many negative developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69818181818 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46569617653 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9857690323 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224350293658 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807096882687 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702691007253 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154570190529 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622595411038 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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