The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption.
The line graph demonstrates the meat and poultry consumption in US from 1955 to 2012. Its measured unit was pounds.
Overall, beef got the highest consumption in the united State among four brands of meats whereas the turkey consumming was the smallest. there had been a remain constant in the consumption of pork and turkey while eating beef and broilers increased.
it is immediately obvious that the amount of beef eaten rose considerably before reaching a peak to 90 pounds in 1979 and then fell slightly to 50 pounds in 2012. The consumption of broilers experienced a significant rise from 1961 to 2009, followed by a slightly decrease during its period time to 2012. there was stability in the consumtion of pork after flutuating between 1995 and 2000. on the other hand, the number of turkey stayed unchanged over the course of 51 years starting from 1961.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ant rise from 1961 to 2009, followed by a slightly decrease during its period time to 2012. there w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94557823129 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68186009107 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9029240546 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829519400406 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422679299258 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953401740342 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868366116493 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101077114782 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.