The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption.

The line graph demonstrates the meat and poultry consumption in US from 1955 to 2012. Its measured unit was pounds.

Overall, beef got the highest consumption in the united State among four brands of meats whereas the turkey consuming was the smallest. There had been a stability in the usage of pork and turkey while eating beef and broilers increased.

It is immediately obvious that the amount of beef eaten rose considerably before reaching a peak to 90 pounds in 1979 and then fell slightly to 50 pounds in 2012. The consumption of broilers experienced a rise from 1961 to 2009, followed by a slight decrease during its period time to 2012. There was a stability in the consumption of pork after fluctuating between 1995 and 2000. On the other hand, the number of turkey stayed unchanged over the course of 51 years starting from 1961.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to 2012. Its measured unit was pounds. Overall, beef got the highest consumptio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78767123288 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62446770555 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2170575812 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829519400406 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422679299258 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953401740342 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873475438398 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100801734196 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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