The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.
The line graph compares four sectors in term of the amount of the amount of acid rain emissions that they produced over a period of 17 years in the UK.
Overall, it is evident that there were significant changes in the figures for the four sectors; however, the general trend was downward. Also, Domestic was by far the lowest amount of acid rain emissions throughout the period shown.
In 1990, roundly 3.3 million tons of acid rain emissions came from Electricity, Gas and Water Supply; compared to 2.1 million tons from Other Industries and just around 0.6 million tons from the two other sectors. Over the period, the amount of Electricity, Gas and Water Supply experienced a dramatic decline to 1 million tons in 1999; followed by a period of steady reduction to 0.5 million tons in the year 2007.
At the same time, the figures for Other Industries and Domestic followed the same pattern of gradual decrease and reaching the bottom of nearly 1.5 million and around 0.4, respectively, at the end of the period. Meanwhile, the amount from Transport and communication fluctuated between 0.6 million tons and 1 million tons, peaked at 1 million tons in 2005 before decreasing to 0.6 at the end of the period.
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The line chart illustrates…
The line chart illustrates the amount of acid rain gases manufactured from four distinct industries in the UK. It is clear that the amount of emissions released from most of the sectors decreased, except for the transport and communication sector. In addition, that of the electricity, gas and water supply sector witnessed the most tremendous reduction over the period.
In 1990, the amount of emissions discharged from the electricity, gas and water supply sector was highest at 3.2 million tonnes, followed by other industries and the transport and communication sector, with over 2 million tonnes and 0.8 million tonnes respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for the domestic sector was lowest, with nearly 0.7 million tonnes. In the next 12 years, the other industries and the domestic sector saw slight decreases in the amount of gases to more than 1.25 million tonnes and 0.3 million tonnes respectively. Although there were a dramatic fall in the quantity of acid rain emission from the electric, gas and water supply and a minimal fluctuation in that of the transport and communication sector, the figures for both sectors were equal with nearly 0,9 million tonnes.
During the remaining years, the other industries and the transport and communication sector continued their downward trends, to 1.2 million tonnes and 0.2 million tonnes respectively in the last year of the period. In terms of the electricity, gas and water supply sector, its figure remained stable from 2002 to 2003, the same as the transport and communication sector. However, there was a recovery in that to 1 million ton before a slight reduction of 0,5 million tonnes from 2005 to 2007. Similarly, this period witnessed a considerable fall to 0,5 million tonnes in that of the electricity, gas and water supply sector.
The line chart illustrates…
The line chart illustrates the amount of acid rain gases manufactured from four distinct industries in the UK. It is clear that the amount of emissions released from most of the sectors decreased, except for the transport and communication sector. In addition, that of the electricity, gas and water supply sector witnessed the most tremendous reduction over the period.
In 1990, the amount of emissions discharged from the electricity, gas and water supply sector was highest at 3.2 million tonnes, followed by other industries and the transport and communication sector, with over 2 million tonnes and 0.8 million tonnes respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for the domestic sector was lowest, with nearly 0.7 million tonnes. In the next 12 years, the other industries and the domestic sector saw slight decreases in the amount of gases to more than 1.25 million tonnes and 0.3 million tonnes respectively. Although there were a dramatic fall in the quantity of acid rain emission from the electric, gas and water supply and a minimal fluctuation in that of the transport and communication sector, the figures for both sectors were equal with nearly 0,9 million tonnes.
During the remaining years, the other industries and the transport and communication sector continued their downward trends, to 1.2 million tonnes and 0.2 million tonnes respectively in the last year of the period. In terms of the electricity, gas and water supply sector, its figure remained stable from 2002 to 2003, the same as the transport and communication sector. However, there was a recovery in that to 1 million ton before a slight reduction of 0,5 million tonnes from 2005 to 2007. Similarly, this period witnessed a considerable fall to 0,5 million tonnes in that of the electricity, gas and water supply sector.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80861244019 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57321090175 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497607655502 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7333615874 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224201995383 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104630832308 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660449178697 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135081166813 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518798438295 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.