The graph below shows the unemployment rates in US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
The given line graph indicates how the unemployed rates changed in two countries in march over the period 1993 to 1999.
According to the graph, in Japan, the percentage of unemployment rate showed a rise from 2,5% to just over 3,5% between 1993 and 1995 with some variations. In the next a year, the trend held a noticeable rise to just under 4,5%. After that, there was also an increase together with experiencing mild flutuations and it reached a peak of over 5% in 1998. The percentage represented a decline to 5% at the end of the period.
On the other hand, in US, the number of people who had an unemployed status was much more than Japan being 7% in 1993. However, the number witnessed a period of instability during the next years and decreased to over 5,5% in 1996. Till the end of the period, it also declined to 5%.
Overall, there was an increase the unemployment rate in Japan while the rate was registred with a corresponding decrease in US.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of instability during the next years and decreased to over 5,5% in 1996. Till the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54913294798 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64598493177 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8553830945 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30810157969 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106971906775 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129569764373 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191194531221 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860646191945 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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