Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often said that whether there is some restrictions which are imposed by governments on playing hazardous sports or individuals should have a right to engage any sport activities that they are interested in. This essay will discuss both for and against this cure.
On the one hand, the people who support the prohibition of dangerous sports, firstly, they believe these kinds of sport activities appear serious risks on the sportsman or sportswomen’s life. For example, the individuals who go in for skiing or mountaineering have to face up complicated tasks of the performance, as a result, they injure or even kill during their playing. Secondly, extreme sports game might cause to be damaged not only sportsmen’s life but also the spectators of the game. Take motor racing as a example, if driver make any mistakes the people who are fan of this sport and are watching it closely may be injured. Finally, these sport activities might provoke individuals into illegal betting in the society.
However, the opponents of the first view claim that individuals should feel free to be occupied with any sport games and it is pointless to ban them. There are plenty of evidences which advocate the second opinion. The first one is that, several people crave to demonstrate their abilities in their favorite sport so that the people may find themselves in hazardous games. Another one is that, most spectators come to watch these performances to the place, as a result of this, much more facilities or employing opportunities may be created for the local population.
Taking everything into consideration, although modern sport activities involve some dangerous and extreme games, from my standpoint, it would be sensible decision to be prohibition on these sports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: there are some restrictions
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Suggestion: an
...ators of the game. Take motor racing as a example, if driver make any mistakes th...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... if driver make any mistakes the people who are fan of this sport and are watching it c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15570934256 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95276366013 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0622577514 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204025737938 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717528701571 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051828695518 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125159304762 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389561550735 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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