some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are myriad of noxious sports that harm folks due to which peoples are having great dilemma about whether it should be ban by the local authorities or should have freedom. In my opinion, local councils should ban hazardous sports like cricket, car racing, and bungee jumping.
At the outset, in order to maintain ourselves healthy and physically fit, a person should play sports which do not cause any type of injury to our body. For example, in twenty century a hard ball hit a person at the back side of his brain owing to which he died. Therefore, person's health is more crucial than playing sport. Government should ban such types of sports by the reason of lack of safety protections. For the adventure purpose as well as to show people that he or she is fearless they try to do dangerous sports which lead to a permanent injury. To cite an example, Ayush Patel gone in comma because he was trying bungee jumping for the sake of fun sans having proper safety. On an account of which he is facing brain problem and still in comma. Henceforth, councils should ban such sports and can also do some awareness campaigns to make citizen of a country to avoid such types of sports in which their life is in risk and have to face plethora of problems.
Other people have different view on this, they think that in an independent country no restriction should be imposed by authorities on sports or other activities which are harmful. Every person need freedom to do any sport or activity. For adventure purpose people likes to do such type of sports. And it should not be ban because they have their own choice and personal belief. Sometimes they want thrill in their life ergo they support such sports or activities.
In conclusion, rather than supporting such sports government should ban it because it has some ripple consequences in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7003058104 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43252901168 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5852852781 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353229157769 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119909016169 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813142373451 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231101002758 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614689317303 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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