Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different perspectives on whether extreme sports such as boxing or mountain climbing should be prohibited or not. While banning these sports could beneficial to some extent, I would argue that people should be free to such sports if they so wish.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why banning these sports could benefit citizens. First, since people who participate in these sports might expose themselves to serious injuries or even get killed. The danger of such sports can be exemplified in Vietnam where a foreign tourist has suffered from a severe injury since he had fallen down after trying to climb up to a craggy mountain. Hence, outlawing these sports is to guarantee the safety of citizens. Second, some extreme sports such as boxing represent violence, which somehow encourages aggressive behaviors of viewers.
On the other hand, I think that the government should not impose a ban on dangerous sports. One reason is that the risk of accidents and injuries can be minimized by putting on a range of essential sports gears which effectively protect those playing sports which are dangerous. That means it is unnecessary to ban these sports as participants can protect themselves. Additionally, people often undertake rigorous training for a long period to ensure that they are in the pick of physical conditions. This exercise not only reduces the risk of injuries but benefits people’s health. As a result, the government should allow the practice of dangerous sports to stimulate healthy lifestyle of citizens
In conclusion, although these sports might be accompanied by risks of injuries, I would argue that they should not be banned because the risks have been minimized and the practice of these sports benefits people’s health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21951219512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74708570398 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4895164713 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270058575318 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109569794733 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991506902818 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18331165047 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065180922484 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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