Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are many kinds of sports playing in today's world, however, few of them are really dangerous to play. According to many, the law enforcement agency should outlaw these kinds of sports while others believe that everyone has a right to do anything until it's not illegal. This essay will take a look at both sides of the argument before reaching a concrete decision.
To commence with those who advocate the ban of sports which could be unsafe to play for several reasons. Firstly, playing these extreme sports can cause some serious injuries and also could lead to death. More specifically, games such as boxing, karate, racing, and others can be very dangerous since they are very risky and a single mistake can make a player physically disable or killed. In addition, spectators can also get affected in these contests as they are nearby to the players or area. For instance, in the last year's UFC championship event, the cameraman was shot down by a fighter without any reason and lost his consciousness. In other words, these extreme sports can cause harm to the individual as well as to the group of people.
On the contrary, many support the view that everybody has the freedom to express his talent or passion in the fields. It is also believed by some that restricting extreme sports can waste talents which can cause demotivation in the people who are willing to express their talents. Moreover, numerous employment opportunities could be created for local residents in the domains related to constructing sports facilities and supplying other services ranging from selling souvenirs to offering accommodation to tourists.
To sum up, although many claim that dangerous sports should not be ban since it is a way to show their talents, I strongly opine that they should be prohibited and ban by governments to prevent the risk concerned with life and other health problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun support seems to be countable; consider using: 'many supports'.
Suggestion: many supports
...group of people. On the contrary, many support the view that everybody has the freedom...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
... to tourists. To sum up, although many claim that dangerous sports should not be ban...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99684542587 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62471942243 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599369085174 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5657928672 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3076923077 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190240482265 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596763327885 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456468383817 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118543171447 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374876779216 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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