The chart shows the proportion of graduates from Bluesky University in 2006 entiring different employment sectors.
The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of graduates from Bluesky University who chose their work career in various employment sectors after finishing the university in 2006.
Looking more closely at the data on the chart, the most popular choice of the students was to work in industries service being 33% or one-third of total choices. As next popular sectors were manufacturing industry and education registered with 16.3 % and 14.7% respectively. Moreover, the numbers of students who wanted to work in policy government account for noticeable proportion of choices with 12.1%.
Turning to the least popular choices, 7.8 % graduates chose their career on the art, entertainment and media. Meanwhile, the percentage of students in civil service was 5.6%. Charity and Sport followed them with tiny proportions of the total choices, showing 0.3% and 0.1% respectively.
Overall, overwhelming, industry and government were the most popular choices compared to others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere the most popular choices compared to others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, third, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59459459459 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93193906258 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3327012482 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17963546599 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676821598418 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102306962456 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113440051917 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126595048114 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.