The chart shows the proportion of graduates from Bluesky University in 2006 entiring different employment sectors.
The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of students who enter in various employment sectors after finishing the Bluesky university in 2006.
Looking more closely at the data on the chart, the most popular choice of the students was to work in industries service being 33% or one-third of total choices. As next popular sectors, manufacturing industry and education registered being little difference, with 16.3 % and 14.7% respectively. Moreover, the numbers of students who wanted to work in policy government account for noticeable proportion of choices with 12.1%.
Turning to the other choices, 7.8 % graduates chose their career on the art, entertainment and media while the percentage of students in civil service was 5.6%. Charity and Sport followed them with tiny proportions of the total choices, showing 0.3% and 0.1% respectively. In general, overwhelming, industry and government were the most popular choices compared to others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...es, showing 0.3% and 0.1% respectively. In general, overwhelming, industry and g...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere the most popular choices compared to others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, third, while, as to, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54482758621 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95114240926 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648275862069 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.5463430298 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159858874723 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672565186956 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687387571274 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119680267589 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732985971848 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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