“The graph shows the average amount of money women earned as a percentage of men’s earnings in the USA from 1975 to 2005.”
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph provides information about the difference between women and men’s wages in the USA between the years 1975 and 2005 for four age ranges.
In general, it can be seen an increase in the earnings of women with respect to men, during the period shown in the graph.
As is observed from the line graph, the women of 16 to 24 years-old earned more than the women of the other age groups who are more than 24 years-old. The younger women’s wages had a peak in 1985, after that it levelled-off around 90%.
Moving to a more detailed analysis, in the first five years for the two younger age ranges, there was a slightly increase. For 45 to 54 years group there was a slightly decrease from 1975 to 1980, and in 200o it peaked with a little over 70%. In the third range there were two peaks, the first in 1995, after that it decreased until 2000 where there was the second peak.
So, in 2005 it can be seen a similar percentage of both big ages groups: for the younger two groups the wages were about 90% of men’s wages; instead for the remaining two groups the wages were almost 75% of men’s wages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...r the two younger age ranges, there was a slightly increase. For 45 to 54 years group there was a s...
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Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...ase. For 45 to 54 years group there was a slightly decrease from 1975 to 1980, and in 200o it peake...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, in general, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46634615385 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27597900614 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533653846154 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8890649798 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.125 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201712317023 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888940829222 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633839205735 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124221814248 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573793647328 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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