“Both men and women care more about their appearance today than they did in the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?”
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Generally, people are more fashion-conscious these days. Economy has become stronger and wider, in comparison with past time, which provides more freedom to people to do what they want. Nowadays they have much more possibilities to be in trend and build their own fashion style. On the face of it, a negative wind is also there. However, I would appreciate former opinion.
One reason for this is that these day, men and women feel they have to look good too. In fact, the majority of them believe that image and clothes are really important to give some information about habits, lifestyle or personality. Overall, a good look could influent on career or a personal life, because the first view about individuals is making by estimating appearance. For examples, if person well-dressed it makes them attractive and expresses a good impression on others.
Yet another reason for this trend is the coming up of new brands. Nowadays the brands play a relevant role in the society. In fact, the brands are really important as well as the good look because it give also information about social background. Especially among young people, the brand represents a fundamental requirement to be part of a group. Furthermore, fashion changes quickly, and this is one of the reasons why people buy clothes every season, even if they don’t’ have really need.
In conclusion, shopping and estimating appearance help people in the work relationship or for the young people, help them to be part a group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... stronger and wider, in comparison with past time, which provides more freedom to people ...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...opinion. One reason for this is that these day, men and women feel they have to look g...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...ant as well as the good look because it give also information about social backgroun...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...en if they don't' have really need. In conclusion, shopping and estimat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.056 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88997162616 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3414276939 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175766913397 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514067743172 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494046208437 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093689432206 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351211461967 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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