The line graph illustrates data about the earnings of three bakehouse in the US over a period of 10 years in £.
Overall, it is obvious that robbie's bakery had a substantial income, which turns out to be the highest of all over the given decade.
To begin with, bemie's burns renumeration stood at 20,000 £ in the year 2000, it saw a slight increase 3 years after accounting for about 38,000 £, after which she had a steady earnings over the following 6 years period, it thereafter plunged to over 60,000£ in 2010. On the other hand, lovely loaves had a significantly great allowance for a start, which is unarguably the highest of them all, 80,000£, after which saw a gradual decrease over a 3 year period, I however leveled off to 40,000£ in 2008, since then the figure remained constant.
On the other hand, Robbie's bakery generated an income of 5,000£ for a start in 2000,and therefore remained constant over the following 5 years. It thereafter saw a gradual rise and then dramatically increased, she saw her highest income in 2010 owning to about 102,000£ which was the highest of all the 3 bakeries in the US.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bakehouse' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bakehouses'.
Suggestion: bakehouses
...trates data about the earnings of three bakehouse in the US over a period of 10 years in ...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£000'.
Suggestion: £000
..., bemies burns renumeration stood at 20,000 £ in the year 2000, it saw a slight incre...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£000'.
Suggestion: £000
...e 3 years after accounting for about 38,000 £, after which she had a steady earnings ...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£000'.
Suggestion: £000
...eriod, it thereafter plunged to over 60,000£ in 2010. On the other hand, lovely loav...
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Line 4, column 398, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£000'.
Suggestion: £000
... unarguably the highest of them all, 80,000£, after which saw a gradual decrease ove...
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Line 4, column 489, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£000'.
Suggestion: £000
...ear period, I however leveled off to 40,000£ in 2008, since then the figure remained...
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Line 6, column 60, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£000'.
Suggestion: £000
...Robbies bakery generated an income of 5,000£ for a start in 2000,and therefore remai...
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Line 6, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t thereafter saw a gradual rise and then dramatically increased, she saw her high...
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Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£000'.
Suggestion: £000
...hest income in 2010 owning to about 102,000£ which was the highest of all the 3 bake...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, therefore, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70351758794 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63930581852 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9897427804 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1666666667 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100222235228 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662494757796 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565218715624 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836540539047 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599965484869 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.