The graph shows how the prices of "high-tech gadgets" changed over time.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
The graph compares the average prices of both the navigation system and smartphone starting from July 2004 to December 2006. It is clear that although at first the price of navigation systems is more than the smartphones as the years went by the average prices became almost identical.
In the span of July-December 2004, both the gadgets were having a peak in their average prices(3900 versus 3100 US dollars). In the following months(January-June 2005), the prices dropped lower for both navigation systems and smartphones to 3200 and 2800 US Dollars respectively. Furthermore, the navigation system goes even more down to 3100 USD whereas, the smartphones had shown some rise to its average price by 100 USD.
Moreover, in the first half of 2006, the graph had recorded growth in the average prices of the navigation system to 3400 USD. However, the next half had shown a drastic decline in the navigation systems to its lowest average price(2700 USD). whereas, in the case of smartphones, the average price remained constant for the whole year(2006) with the rate of 2800 USD-was the lowest average price for smartphones as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...navigation system goes even more down to 3100 USD whereas, the smartphones had sh...
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Suggestion: Whereas
...ms to its lowest average price2700 USD. whereas, in the case of smartphones, the averag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05347593583 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81893768593 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.3035557231 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.125 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109468736667 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059443789455 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210602831417 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849994179424 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109602949115 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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