Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is believed that the growth of a nation only depends upon the education system. However, I partially agree with this notion because there umpteen of factors involve while considering the development of any country.
Moreover, it cannot be denied the fact that the education system plays a vital role in the countries economy. Even though, it cannot be considered as the only one critical factor. There are several various other factors such as the infrastructure of a country which Is also an integral part of the development. Furthermore, the employment rate also considered a significant key role in the growth of a nation. In addition to that, the most important factor is globalization means international companies are investing in different countries. Therefore, if the globalization rate is high in any country that will automatically lead to creating more new jobs.
On the other hand, education is indeed the base of each factor involved in the development of a nation. For example, for good infrastructure in any country, they should have the latest technologies that will come through the education itself. Even, the companies will invest in any country by looking at various things but one of the main thing they will look onto is the skilled workers which also can be achieved by education. As a result, the country needs to increase its literacy rate if they want to emerge as a developing nation.
In conclusion, the countries need to be encouraged their people towards education and other various factors also if they want to develop at a faster rate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...cation system plays a vital role in the countries economy. Even though, it cannot be cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05363984674 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92955914087 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4214428908 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221401733761 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843830917557 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05609540282 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15573915406 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530283813466 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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