Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a
country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As per the development of the country is concerned education plays an important role. Education is the backbone of a country's progress Because education leads to innovation, the creation of new ideas, etc. which eventually helps in the further progress of the nation. Therefore, to accomplish this, a proper education system is a must. Most of the developed countries have well-educated citizens and exemplary education systems which represents the importance of the education system for the development of a county.
Nevertheless, as we know many such factors that lead to the successful progress of the nation. So, having a perfect education system is one of them. A country's welfare and development are not only dependent on the education system but also other aspects such as having an upright economic system, having adequate human and natural resources, good international relationships, etc.
Therefore, the government cannot rely on only one aspect for the development of the entire nation. Every aspect should be properly planned and executed for better results. Such as, maintaining a good economic system is also a crucial task, as if the economy of the country goes down then that country will face a drastic change in its development. Due to this, the nation has to be dependent on the help of other countries over the globe and this will shrink the further progress. Also, a balanced government is important because the decisions taken by the government have an impact on the citizens as well as the growth of the country in every sector.
Hence, it will be biased if we say that the education system is only a critical aspect for the further progress of the country. The contribution of other factors is also very crucial for the better evolution of that particular country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09830508475 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88656756989 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8836869349 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250082806953 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926117089428 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638528843187 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164518326228 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045048288396 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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