The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000

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The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.

The line graph compared between the number of marriages and that of divorces in America from 1975 to 2000.
Overall, it is clear that the number of the 1st marriages decreased in the 1975-2000 period, while that of the 2nd marriages significantly rose at the same time. Besides, although the total number of marriages in the US experienced an increasing trend, the figure of the divorces steadily grew during the 1975-2000 period.
At the starting point in 1975, America had roughly 340 thousand couples who married for the first time, compare to the second time, at around 150 thousand couples. Although there was a slight growth to 410 thousand in 1985, the figure of the 1st marriages rapidly dropped to 300 thousand in 2000. In contrast, the figure of the 2nd marriages grew to 360 thousand, in spite of an insignificant decreasing in 1995.
From 1975 to 1985, the total number of marriages had a rise from exactly 500 thousand to approximately 640 thousand, likewise, that of the divorces also increased from nearly 80 thousand to precisely 200 thousand. Nevertheless, America witnessed a considerable decrease of the total number of marriages from 640 thousand in 1985 to 580 thousand in 2000, while the number of the divorces increased to 250 thousand in 2000.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, likewise, nevertheless, second, so, while, in contrast, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9765258216 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76480782578 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474178403756 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.54941005 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323842883645 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194093950381 0.103423049105 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15605561081 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285475337852 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173034681783 0.0819641961636 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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