The graph shows the percentage of male and female Academic Staff members across the faculties of major University in 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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... different categories in the year 2012. At a fleeting glance,it is lucid that,th...
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... At a fleeting glance,it is lucid that,the maximum percentage of males was recorde...
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...d in the stream of Engineering with 80%.However,in Business and Science faculty men dep...
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...e stream of Engineering with 80%.However,in Business and Science faculty men depict...
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...e faculty men depicts the similar ratio.Whereas,in Education males acquired less fracti...
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...ty men depicts the similar ratio.Whereas,in Education males acquired less fraction ...
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...d less fraction than females around 22%.In Medicine they witnessed the percentage ...
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...the percentage near about two quarters. Upon further scrutinizing,it is vivid th...
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... Upon further scrutinizing,it is vivid that,the most popular faculty ...
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...on further scrutinizing,it is vivid that,the most popular faculty in women was Educa...
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...y in women was Education, just under 80% ,While,approximately 55% of females worke...
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...men was Education, just under 80% ,While,approximately 55% of females worked in arts.In law,ma...
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...oximately 55% of females worked in arts.In law,males witnessed the proportion of 6...
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...ely 55% of females worked in arts.In law,males witnessed the proportion of 60% and 40%...
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... proportion of 60% and 40% respectively.Nearly one third of women were in Science staf...
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...ne third of women were in Science staff.In Medicine 50% of interest shown by women...
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...Medicine 50% of interest shown by women.The minimum ratio of females was accounted ...
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...Engineering section which was only 18%. Overall,it can be seen that,Engineering,...
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... Overall,it can be seen that,Engineering,Business,S...
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... Overall,it can be seen that,Engineering,Business,Science and Law fields were po...
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...it can be seen that,Engineering,Business,Science and Law fields were popular among men a...
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...ajority of women have interested in Arts,Education and Medicine.
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...erested in Arts,Education and Medicine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8417721519 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.04693759448 2.65546596893 152% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.265584824 43.030603864 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.75 112.824112599 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5 22.9334400587 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102004940964 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061973668854 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027734563987 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102004940964 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.2329268293 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 61.2550243902 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 10.3012195122 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 11.4140731707 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.06136585366 132% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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