The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the number of passengers in the London underground station on a particular day from 6 in the morning to 10 p.m. It is showed in the graph that the number of underground station passengers on that day was not monotonically increasing or decrease. Instead, there exited loads of fluctuations throughout the day with the most eminent peak at 8 a.m., followed by the second highest volume of passengers at 6 p.m.

The statistics tracked the number of passengers from the early 6 p.m., starting from 100 people in the subway station. Then it witnessed a significant growth in the following two hours and peaked at 400 people at 8 a.m. Then the number dropped more than a half to less than 200 people. From 10 a.m. to 2 p.m., a gradual increase in passenger volume pulled the number up to 300, yet a sudden drop decreased the number to 100 at 4 p.m. which was the same as the starting point.

The following 4 hours showed a considerably similar pattern as the period from 6 to 10 in the morning, although the second peak was slightly less than 400. The graph hit its second lowest point at around 125 and ended at 150 after a modest fluctuation.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56872037915 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71441127517 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530805687204 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9764267666 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173562613124 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936308246959 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980932634245 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125328731656 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811822361442 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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