The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The graphs illustrate the passenger's count of a grounded station in London from early morning to late night.

Overall, The maximum people prefer to use an underground station at peak hours, whereas the ratio drastically reduces before and after those hours.

In 6:00 100 passengers are using this route as a main source of travel, within the two hours interval it's rapidly increasing travelers to 400 and is the maximum throughout the period, but suddenly decreasing the numbers by 210 at 10:10. Till the midday, it's going up with gradual and constant increment and has
300 passengers count.

At 16:00 it gains the same traveler's number as early on the morning and revives the same passengers count again at the peak hours. Until 20:00 the number falls down to almost 125, and is unstable till 22:00 with passengers count of less than 150. The London underground station is serving the equal number of people in the dawn and dusk, whereas in meanwhile a number reduces to the half than the peak hours.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...mbers by 210 at 10:10. Till the midday, its going up with gradual and constant incr...
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Line 8, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he dawn and dusk, whereas in meanwhile a number reduces to the half than the peak...
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Line 8, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...educes to the half than the peak hours.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88953488372 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41442925589 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587209302326 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.762345197 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302049000112 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140524903403 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926799308854 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163561783691 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883151015457 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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