The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table compares the mean precipitation of a month in Hong Kong, Tokyo, Jakarta, Cairo, and London for a year.

Overall, Hong Kong has the maximum rainfall where Cairo has the least. Most of the cities have the highest rainfall in the middle of the year.

According to the table, for the first six months, rainfall is in increasing order for Hong Kong, Tokyo, and Jakarta but Cairo and London have reverse order. The Jakarta has 300mm of rainfall in January which is followed by London with 80mm, Tokyo with 48mm, Hong Kong contains 24mm and the least precipitation in Cairo of 7mm. For the next following months, the rainfall in Hong Kong and Tokyo rises gradually but the other three cities have a decline.

Again for the second half, In August the rainfall grow up by 354mm than January in Hong Kong, which is the highest throughout the period, and slumping down for rest months in Hong Kong and Tokyo. In contrast, in Jakarta and London rain amount is constantly growing till the end of the year but Cairo has no rainfall from September to December. By the end, Jakarta has the highest rainfall of 210mm where other cities have under 80mm.

Votes
Average: 7.2 (18 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68965517241 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23418430514 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467980295567 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7372735094 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161482355295 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935913395663 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370664112414 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132639826807 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280399689553 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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