The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the average monthly monsoon data of five different cities in a single year.

Overall, It can be seen that Hongkong and Jakarta are two cities with a significant amount of rain in a year.

Firstly, the city of Cario has seen the lowest amount of rainfall all around the year with a maximum of 27mm in the month of August. Further, London city has recorded the second least drizzling and the average rainfall is 50mm throughout the year.

Secondly, The highest rainstorms can be observed in Hongkong in the month of June and August over more than 300mm and as low as 24mm in the month of January. Followed by Jakarta, the average rainfall in the city with respect to data can be identified as 100mm. Lastly, heavy rainfall in Tokyo can be seen in the month of June, September, October, and 190mm was the highest rainfall recorded in the following year and minimal rains in the month of January with 48mm.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67272727273 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39187482896 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521212121212 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4066752613 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215068211629 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120110633676 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477247066863 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15002429364 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544561895919 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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