The graphs below show the age structure of a European country from 1901 to 1981 and a prediction for 2021.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of age structure in a european nation from 1901 to 1981 and a forecast for 2021
It is obvious that proportion of people under 65 years old took the first place in pie chart over 120 years but has a diminishing trend, while the percentage of group age over 65 hold a insignificant tendency. The total population is estimated to rise to 2021
Looking to 1901 and 1941, we can easily see that the population structure in this country was completely the same, with has an overwhelming majority of its population about 95 percent below 65 , 4% between 65 and 85, and a slight 1 percent over 85 years old.
Moving to 1981, considerable changes in decline are shown in the pie chart including a fall of 12 percent in the group under 65 years old and a rise in people over 65 years old.The figure for the population between 65 and 85 years old had increased an amount of 9 percent , while the last group <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">witnessed </span>an increase nearly 3 percent.According to 2021, population is excepted to go up to 87 658 000 which nearly doubles the population in 1901. The data for the group under aged 65 is going to decline of 4 percent and the figure for people from 65 to 85 years old and people over 85 continue to increased of 2 percent similarly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61016949153 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19860237115 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504237288136 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.825714202 43.030603864 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 272.0 112.824112599 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.0 22.9334400587 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173965328049 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12376462662 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578925661959 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164860280669 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151105651249 0.0819641961636 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.2329268293 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.3012195122 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.35 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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