The graphs below show the average monthly expenditure on children's sport and participation in different sports in the UK from 2008 to 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs, two in numbers, delineate the standard periodic expense and number of children engaged in three different sports, namely football, athletics and swimming in the United Kingdom from 2008 to 2014, expressing the amounts in terms of the pounds and millions respectively.
Overall, as the year advanced children's sport had become costlier. In addition, football remained the most popular sport over the years but the least favorite changed into swimming from athletics.
A cursory examination of the first line graph reveals the amount of money spent in 2008 was 20 pounds per month which had increased steadily over the next six years and at the year 2014, it was 32 pounds.
As we move into the second graph, representing the number of children participating in different sports, football with about 8 million children in 2008 up from rose gradually to 9 million after six years. Swimming with 2 million at the beginning of the period steadily increased to 3 million in 2014. However, athletics had shown the most dramatic improvement of about octuple over a period of six years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and at the year 2014, it was 32 pounds. As we move into the second graph, repres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09944751381 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65908336403 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0555341386 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16310510716 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762415175852 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453762215426 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980398250037 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186084216608 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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