The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world

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The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world.

The bar charts illustrate how much an average house costs in England and its capital – London, as well as in comparison with the average prices of other areas in England in the spans of 1995 and 2013.
Generally, residents living in the capital of England, London had to pay far more for a house compared to other areas in the country. Especially, the average costs for house in London oftentimes leaded while North East had the lowest average house price in the nation.
In 1995, the average amount of money paying for a house in London was around 200000 euro, relatively higher than those of England, at nearly 130000 euro. There were incredible differences between the capital’s average prices and other areas’ ones in the England becoming noticeable in the year of 2013.
In 2013, incredibly, the average house costs in London boomed with double remarkable figure, over 4000000 in comparison with the country’s average prices. In addition, its prices still stood at the top of list. In south East, residents also paid relative high costs to own a house approximately 320000 euro followed by South West and North West with 260000 and 200000 in orderly. Whereas, in both Midlands and North East, there were more affordable housing prices only 120000 and 100000 respectively

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