The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world

Essay topics:

The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world.

Given are the bar charts delineating the average house costs in England and London-its capital city over a course of time, commencing 1995 to 2013, in addition comparing the average house prices between disparate areas of England in the 2013s.
Perceptibly, the average house prices in London and the nations urged in the mentioned year. And house costs in London was higher average country and hold the first ranks compared to other sectors while the opposite was true for North East.
Outstandingly, there was a further 70,000€ upswings in a normal house cost in England within 18 years from 125,000 in 1995. Meanwhile, that of London in 2013 achieved to over 400,000€ which was double than the original figures and the country’s average at the same time.
When to comes of house prices of different regions in 2003, first on the list was London, second hierarchy belonged to South East with 32,000€, which was 50,000€ higher than that of South West, and followed by North West with figure at 20,000€. Finally, the cheapest house cost was Midland and North East with average prices at only around 100,000€.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the bar charts delineating the average ...
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Suggestion: €000
... Outstandingly, there was a further 70,000€ upswings in a normal house cost in Engl...
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... of London in 2013 achieved to over 400,000€ which was double than the original figu...
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...ierarchy belonged to South East with 32,000€, which was 50,000€ higher than that of ...
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...o South East with 32,000€, which was 50,000€ higher than that of South West, and fol...
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...ollowed by North West with figure at 20,000€. Finally, the cheapest house cost was M...
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... with average prices at only around 100,000€.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02139037433 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46470118333 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5735191265 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195620515661 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114413404182 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640918852637 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1421972341 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061746523573 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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