The graphs give information about average house prices in England and other parts of the world.
The given bar charts illustrate the average house costs in 1995 and 2013 in England and its capital- London, as well as comparing the average house prices between 6 different areas of England in 2013.
Overall, as can be seen from the first graph, the house prices in both England and London witnessed an upward trend. It is also apparent that standard houses in London cost much higher than remaining areas.
In 1995, the average price of a house in London was over 125000 £. This number increased significantly by around 75000£ to 200000£ 18 years later. A roughly similar trend was seen in the figure for house cost in England in general, where it soared twice to approximately 400000£ at the end of the period.
The average house price in 2013 was the highest in London, at 400000£, followed by South East, at around 300000£. In South West and North West, these numbers were 275000£ and 200000£, respectively. In contrast, the costs were much lower in Midlands and North West, with the figure at only around 100000£.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£125000'.
Suggestion: £125000
...age price of a house in London was over 125000 £. This number increased significantly by...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£75000'.
Suggestion: £75000
...umber increased significantly by around 75000£ to 200000£ 18 years later. A roughly si...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£200000'.
Suggestion: £200000
...eased significantly by around 75000£ to 200000£ 18 years later. A roughly similar trend...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£400000'.
Suggestion: £400000
... where it soared twice to approximately 400000£ at the end of the period. The average...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it soared twice to approximately 400000£ at the end of the period. The average h...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£400000'.
Suggestion: £400000
...e in 2013 was the highest in London, at 400000£, followed by South East, at around 3000...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£300000'.
Suggestion: £300000
...000£, followed by South East, at around 300000£. In South West and North West, these nu...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£275000'.
Suggestion: £275000
...West and North West, these numbers were 275000£ and 200000£, respectively. In contrast,...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£200000'.
Suggestion: £200000
...th West, these numbers were 275000£ and 200000£, respectively. In contrast, the costs w...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£100000'.
Suggestion: £100000
...th West, with the figure at only around 100000£.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, in contrast, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80337078652 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42129617504 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7681552607 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221186991547 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954719709982 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867699945879 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150220898173 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617213053808 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£125000'.
Suggestion: £125000
...age price of a house in London was over 125000 £. This number increased significantly by...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£75000'.
Suggestion: £75000
...umber increased significantly by around 75000£ to 200000£ 18 years later. A roughly si...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£200000'.
Suggestion: £200000
...eased significantly by around 75000£ to 200000£ 18 years later. A roughly similar trend...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£400000'.
Suggestion: £400000
... where it soared twice to approximately 400000£ at the end of the period. The average...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it soared twice to approximately 400000£ at the end of the period. The average h...
^^
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£400000'.
Suggestion: £400000
...e in 2013 was the highest in London, at 400000£, followed by South East, at around 3000...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£300000'.
Suggestion: £300000
...000£, followed by South East, at around 300000£. In South West and North West, these nu...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£275000'.
Suggestion: £275000
...West and North West, these numbers were 275000£ and 200000£, respectively. In contrast,...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£200000'.
Suggestion: £200000
...th West, these numbers were 275000£ and 200000£, respectively. In contrast, the costs w...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '£100000'.
Suggestion: £100000
...th West, with the figure at only around 100000£.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, in contrast, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80337078652 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42129617504 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7681552607 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221186991547 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954719709982 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867699945879 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150220898173 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617213053808 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.