HOMESCHOOLING IS BECOMING INCREASINGLY AS MORE AND MORE PARENTS ARE CHOOSING TO EDUCATE THEIR CHILDREN IN THIS WAY
WHY DO YOU THINK PARENTS MIGHT CHOOSE HOMESCHOOLING RATHER THAN TRADITIONAL SCHOOLS?
DO YOU THINK HOMESCHOOLING IS MORE BENEFICIAL?
Homeschooling is not something new as many evidences of its existance from earlier days has been found. Some parents consider that it is the best way of education rather than the conventional schooling system. This essay will outline the reasons like fewer expenses and safety are responsible for the selection of school in the home environment and also expound why typical schools have more benefits compared to it.
As far as motivating factors for selecting homeschool are concerned, there are many responsible causes; however, safety and low expenses are the most admiring reasons. Indeed, school is the place where children enjoy even though for some, it is an intimidating place as they face issues such as bullying and isolation. These contribute to their fear that results in either low-esteem personality or in some worst cases-attempt to suicide, whereas staying home would offer them peace of mind and opportunity to thrive. Another factor is the lower price, the fee structure based on services provided by schools.The government fund made it affordable although not for all. Learning at home is by far economical as teaching is conducted by the one of family members which saves fees.Not only this but also other miscellenous expenses such as uniform cost, and fees for extracurricular activies are also eliminated as children do their education at home.
The benefits of typical schooling system cannot be substituted as it is multifaceted approach to develop a bright future of children.
Actually, in schools where they play, learn and eat in the most diversed environment, that help them to gain acceptance of differences, collaboration, teamwork, leadership, and time management.
These skills are foundation of their successful life while many homeschooled professionals find difficulties to work in the diverse group.
If schools are replaced by the home education system, many social skills would be compromised in children.
Overall, despite the advantages of homeschool such as safety and less expenses, the positive aspects of typical school system can not be neglected as it offers the development of many social abilities.
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actually, also, but, however, if, so, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 965.302439024 189% => OK
No of words: 338.0 196.424390244 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40532544379 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99993726811 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 106.607317073 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609467455621 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 283.868780488 203% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7786935736 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.538461538 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169263301769 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578621527499 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037943849542 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750827309864 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469921798724 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 40.7170731707 243% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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