How have you contributed to solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform? (Be specific and include: what aspect/s of your leadership knowledge, skills and practice you consider to be well established and effective; which people or organisations you worked with to solve the problem; and what creative methods were used.)*:
While working at hoang lien national park in Lao Cai Province in Vietnam, I noticed that the red dao people in the area have collected a lot of natural medicinal plants for processing bath medicines and serving tourism.
In 2015, I think that if this continues, some medicinal plants may disappear soon. I have written a proposal for the project "red dao medicinal bath product value change based on biodiversity products" and asked the German development Cooperation (GIZ) to finance the implementation, through the ASEAN Center for biodiversity. The project with objectives: income improvement - poverty reduction to farmers, gender equality and sustainable biodiversity conservation/development.
we implement the project from 2017 to 2019 and by 2019, with the bottom-up approach and teamwork we have achieved the following results:
- Selecting 70 households to participate in the project.
- Scientific name of the collection plants for processing bath medicine.
- Identify 10 valuable plant species on genetic resources and bath medicinal herbs for planting in mother tree gardens.
- planted one garden of mother trees with 200 well-grown plants, one nursery garden and 42,500 seedlings were propagated.
- planted 15,500 Cinnamomum casia trees, 10,000 Berberis julianae trees, 3,000 Elsholtzia penduliflora trees, 3,000 Sambucus nigra ssp. Canadensis (L). Bolli trees and 1,000 Schefflera delavayi trees. Now we are continuing to cultivate 10,000 seedlings (Total area equivalent to 7 ha with 43 participating households).
- develop regulations on collection management and processing of medicinal plants.
The forest area of the hoang lien national park is protected by 5,000 ha.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (dao) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
... in Vietnam, I noticed that the red dao people in the area have collected a lot of nat...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...biodiversity conservation/development. we implement the project from 2017 to 2019...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81927710843 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30951138396 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 106.607317073 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66265060241 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.1546282549 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0310321550289 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00855910039602 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0139309047817 0.0843802449381 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0116747947467 0.15604864568 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152672967712 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 40.7170731707 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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