While working at Hoang Lien National Park in Lao Cai Province in Vietnam, I noticed that the Red Dao people in the area have collected a lot of natural medicinal plants for processing bath medicines and serving tourism.
In 2015, I think that if this continues, some medicinal plants may disappear soon. I have written a proposal for the project "Red Dao bath product value change based on biodiversity products" and asked the German Development Cooperation (GIZ) to finance the implementation, through the ASEAN Center for biodiversity. The project with objectives: income improvement - poverty reduction to farmers, gender equality and sustainable biodiversity conservation/development.
We implement the project from 2017 to 2019 and by 2019, with the bottom-up approach and teamwork we have achieved the following results:
- Selecting 70 households to participate in the project.
- Scientific name of the collection plants for processing bath medicine.
- Identify 10 valuable plant species on genetic resources and bath medicinal herbs for planting in mother tree gardens.
- Planted one garden of mother trees with 200 well-grown plants, one nursery garden and 42,500 seedlings were propagated.
- Planted 15,500 Cinnamomum casia trees, 10,000 Berberis julianae trees, 3,000 Elsholtzia penduliflora trees, 3,000 Sambucus nigra ssp. Canadensis (L). Bolli trees and 1,000 Schefflera delavayi trees. Now we are continuing to cultivate 10,000 seedlings (Total area equivalent to 7 ha with 43 participating households).
- Develop regulations on collection management and processing of medicinal plants.
The forest area of the Hoang Lien National Park is protected by 5,000 ha.
While working at hoang lien national park in Lao Cai Province in Vietnam, I noticed that the red dao people in the area have collected a lot of natural medicinal plants for processing bath medicines and serving tourism.
In 2015, I think that if this continues, some medicinal plants may disappear soon. I have written a proposal for the project "red dao bath product value change based on biodiversity products" and asked the German development Cooperation (GIZ) to finance the implementation, through the ASEAN Center for biodiversity. The project with objectives: income improvement - poverty reduction to farmers, gender equality and sustainable biodiversity conservation/development.
we implement the project from 2017 to 2019 and by 2019, with the bottom-up approach and teamwork we have achieved the following results:
- Selecting 70 households to participate in the project.
- Scientific name of the collection plants for processing bath medicine.
- Identify 10 valuable plant species on genetic resources and bath medicinal herbs for planting in mother tree gardens.
- planted one garden of mother trees with 200 well-grown plants, one nursery garden and 42,500 seedlings were propagated.
- planted 15,500 Cinnamomum casia trees, 10,000 Berberis julianae trees, 3,000 Elsholtzia penduliflora trees, 3,000 Sambucus nigra ssp. Canadensis (L). Bolli trees and 1,000 Schefflera delavayi trees. Now we are continuing to cultivate 10,000 seedlings (Total area equivalent to 7 ha with 43 participating households).
- develop regulations on collection management and processing of medicinal plants.
The forest area of the hoang lien national park is protected by 5,000 ha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (dao) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
... in Vietnam, I noticed that the red dao people in the area have collected a lot of nat...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...odiversity conservation/development. we implement the project from 2017 to 2019...
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Line 19, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...medicinal plants. The forest area of the hoang lien national park is protecte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90725806452 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31567641839 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665322580645 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6516527463 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410103256102 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134419610886 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216679777907 0.0667982634062 324% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172591635851 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241965342268 0.056905535591 425% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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