The provided bar lines illustrate what graduate and postgraduate British students had done in 2008 provided that they decided on not to go into full time jobs.
Overall, The most proportion in both category of graduate and postgraduate students preferred to go for further study, while the least appealing one was voluntary works.
the preferred kind of work in both groups is further study with 29.665 people for graduates. Although it is ten times less for postgraduate students, yet it is the first chosen one with postgraduate people. On the other hand, voluntary work during graduate and postgraduate people ranked least. With around 350 people within postgraduate, and 10fold more, 3500 people within graduates.
It worth nothing that all the measured categories are around ten times more within gradates people than postgraduate ones. Regarding the mentioned subject, part time work includes the second rank for both of them since more than 17735 people have absorbed on doing part time work in graduates and in the vicinity of 2500 persons in graduates. Last of all, unemployment which is the least favorable choice comprised 16235 people of graduates and 1625 people of postgraduates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ded that they decided on not to go into full time jobs. Overall, The most proportion in ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...st appealing one was voluntary works. the preferred kind of work in both groups i...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... ones. Regarding the mentioned subject, part time work includes the second rank for both ...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...han 17735 people have absorbed on doing part time work in graduates and in the vicinity o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, second, so, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27748691099 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73468884278 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581151832461 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5184028809 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148345692919 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681594872174 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054318565598 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107832948608 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514749088771 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.