The provided pie charts illustrate some information about the age of population in two different countries, Italy and Yemen, and it’s projection for 50 years later.
On overview, young people below 14 years old consist 50 percent of Yemeni in 2000 but it will take its place to adult who they are among their 15s and last of fifties in the 2050.Although most of the Italian are in the middle ages, this amount will face a reduction for 50 years later.
First, its apparent from the primary provided pie chart that most of the Yemeni are kids under 14 years old and the projection for 50 years later should be according to less than this amount, about 37 percentage, though it was half of the population in 2000. People much older than 60 years old provide 3.6 percent of Yemeni and it has been projected to increase to almost 6 percent on the following years until 2050.the most important group of every population are middle ages, which are between ages 15 and just below 60 years, this group will have been proliferated from 46% to 57.3% until 2050.
Despite Yemen, the first rank of the population of Italy allot to middle aged, and it going to experience 15% reduction in 2050 standing at 46 percent by far. People above 60 years old consist an approximate one forth of the population in 2000 but it has been planned to be in the vicinity of 40 percent by then. The last quantity belongs to people ages below 14 years otherwise this should decrease to less than 12 percent in 2050.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...eir 15s and last of fifties in the 2050.Although most of the Italian are in the middle a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57089552239 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39444982266 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514925373134 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2803636433 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.0 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.2857142857 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178033091101 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101353976066 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604493566107 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135099506746 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664999852429 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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