The provided tables illustrate the amount of two fairtrade product sales, labelled coffee and banana, among five European countries in 1999 and five years after that, in 2004.
Overall, the most coffee sale was in Switzerland and London respectively in 1999 and 2004, meanwhile, the leader for banana sale was Switzerland in both surveyed years.
In the five investigated countries namely: UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden, Switzerland was the pioneer in banana selling in 1994 and 2004 with 15 million of euros and 47 millions of euros respectively. While Belgium had sold the minimum quantity in 1999, only 0.6 millions of euros, Denmark took its place as the least amount of venture in 2004 with only 0,9 millions of euros.
Like bananas selling, the most income through coffee selling was for Switzerland with 3 million of euros. But soon after that Uk exceed this amount with 20 million of euro in 2004 and became the first rank of coffee selling. the only country where sold coffee less than one million euros was Sweden in 1994 with 0.8 million of euro and stood the at the fifth rank as the weakest country for coffee selling in 2004. Increased by 0.2 reached to 1millions of euro. other countries didn’t have significant changes during these years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '47 million'.
Suggestion: 47 million
...4 and 2004 with 15 million of euros and 47 millions of euros respectively. While Belgium had s...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
...ld the minimum quantity in 1999, only 0.6 millions of euros, Denmark took its place as the le...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '9 million'.
Suggestion: 9 million
...t amount of venture in 2004 with only 0,9 millions of euros. Like bananas selling, the most ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ecame the first rank of coffee selling. the only country where sold coffee less tha...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...ed by 0.2 reached to 1millions of euro. other countries didn’t have significant chang...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97196261682 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4619384052 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556074766355 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7691000564 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259759085109 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116176690613 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114571328891 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203044725725 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123298379012 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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