There is an increasing resemblance in the world as a result of the existence of same products in many countries. Though many people assume that it makes different countries similar, the writer persists to convince the readers of this essay to consider it as a positive achievement within human being.
It used to be exciting for people to see various products as souvenir of alternative countries that were not common in their hometown. While it helped the tourism industry, but with the assisting of export and import we can find every product, which we might need, in our own countries. The result of this development is that people in all over the world feel the same value as well the perfect sense of unity. Meanwhile, they can see this unity as a string that makes them close and less strange with each other. On the other hand, they do not feel homesick in case of being in other countries.
Since import and export introduce different products to other countries, the need for the existence of that special product is felt in the imported country. When they need it, after a while, they start to produce it and a new job will be born. On the other hand, two people whose job are the same feel a sense of alliance and fraternity, in a long term consequence, the sense of equality widespreads between nations and this may reduce war and other enmities in the world.
To conclude, when people can afford to purchase same product a similarity emerge between them. As a result, they sense equality and resemblance so they might do that jobs they perceive an invisible brotherhood between each other. Last of all, this similarity can act as a white flag to reduce war between different nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71140939597 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53588274961 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510067114094 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2210091778 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156557897529 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647475957024 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576573950478 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110150923164 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385242644142 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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