IELTS practice for task 1 about maps of Meadowside village and Foton
The map illustrates the expansion of Meadowside village and Foton town over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and the present).
Overall, the village transferred into the suburb and it is merged with Foton town. Additionally, there was a significant alteration experienced in the infrastructure, residential area and services sector in the town and village over the course of time.
In 1962, Medwood village was situated in the west, in which a small road crosses from the west to north. A railway track goes through Foton, which is located in the east.
The area of both Meadowside village and Foton increased significantly. There was a substantial development in Meadowside village, where housing sector in the west, a complex for leisure activities in the north and a superstore in the south were constructed, while no construction took place in Foton. The small road was enlarged to the main road and an addition road was constructed to from Meadowside to Foton in the east.
Meadowside is a suburb at present and is merged with Foton town. There are few facilities constructed in between Meadowside village and Foton town. For example, a railway station is seen in the centre beside that in the north is the hospital and opposite to the station is a student's park in the south. There is no change in the main road but a railway track is lied down from east to the station.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cross'?
Suggestion: cross
...ated in the west, in which a small road crosses from the west to north. A railway track...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lied down from east to the station.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92796610169 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84128100775 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470338983051 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9782213324 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251804919412 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109781081437 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744974264154 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149341014695 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523849593712 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.