The tables represent sales statistics of two Fairtrade-labelled products in 1994 and how it was changed in 2004 in five UN countries. Overall, sales volume of coffee increased in all countries, while sales of bananas also rose in three countries except two.
According to the first table, the dramatic growth was observed in the UK from 1.5(millions of euros) to 20, therefore British became the largest consumers in 2004. Whereas, the Swiss consumed two times more bananas in 2004(6). In contrast, Denmark and Sweden had a slight rose just by 0.2 similarly, while there was a noticeable increase in Belgium from 1 to 1.7.
The second table shows that Switzerland consumes bananas for 15 millions of euros in 1997, and the number has almost tripled by 2004(47). Similarly, significant growth was observed in the UK and Belgium, from 1 to 5.5 and from 0.6 to 4 respectively. However, sales of bananas decreased almost two times in Sweden(from 1.8 to 1) and in Denmark (from 2 to 0.9).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h became the largest consumers in 2004. Whereas, the Swiss consumed two times more bana...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...s that Switzerland consumes bananas for 15 millions of euros in 1997, and the number has almos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, similarly, so, therefore, whereas, while, as for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86826347305 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8669192905 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6206590414 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 5.23603664747 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184256248089 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891826932521 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785366900012 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134497343356 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10617018505 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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