The illustration demonstrates the proportion of graduates unable to find an appropriate occupation in a specific European nation over the course of a two year.
The illustration demonstrates the proportion of graduates unable to find an appropriate occupation in a specific European nation over the course of a two-year.
Overall, as can be seen, the percentage of unemployed male graduates was higher throughout the time span compared with female graduates. In addition to this, it appears that the unemployment number followed a similar trend in various months for both genders irrespective of their age.
Looking at the bar chart the highest percentage of unemployment is on Oct 09 constituting roughly 22% and 14% for men and women respectively. This followed by Oct 09 making slightly above 15% and 10% for male and female respectively. On Jan 09, April 09 and July 09 the number was approximately 12% for men and 8% for women except for women on April 09 with 6%. On Jan 08, April 08 and July 08 the unemployment rate was far lower for both sexes and all the counterparts experienced lower than 10% in this regard.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ific European nation over the course of a two-year. Overall, as can be seen, the percenta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... women except for women on April 09 with 6%. On Jan 08, April 08 and July 08 the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87804878049 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04226132276 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.5634905319 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189135305664 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147377621138 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.348252814363 0.0843802449381 413% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340628520823 0.15604864568 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.466331645309 0.0819641961636 569% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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