The illustrations below show how coffee is sometimes produce.
The picture provided below shows the process of producing coffee which has four steps and each step has three procedures, starting from selecting the beans and finally bundling the coffee.
In the first stage, the coffee beans are selected manually by hand and cleaned before the whole beans are dried out for 4 weeks long. Just to make sure whether the beans are dried evenly, they are raked and turned by the farmer and then stored into the silo before the beans are sent to the mill, and this is the second phase.
Continuing to the next process, the beans are hulled by the worker, after that in order to purify the results, filtering tool is needed to grade the beans and bagged eventually.
After the bagging process, there are two options in serving the coffee beans, they can be sold directly without entering packaging process or wrapped using labeled package which needs roasting process beforehand.
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filtering tool is needed to
filtering tool is needed to grade the beans and bagged eventually.
filtering tool is ... bagged eventually? can you re-write this sentence?
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Answer:
Filtering tool is needed to grade the beans and then the beans are bagged.
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OK. Better: filtering tools
OK. Better:
filtering tools are needed to grade the beans which will be bagged eventually.
the coffee beans are selected manually by hand and cleaned before the whole beans are dried out for 4 weeks long.
the coffee beans are selected manually by hand and cleaned by sieves, and then dried out in sun for four weeks. //it is not 'before' but after step 1,2
filtering tool is needed to grade the beans and bagged eventually.
filtering tool is ... bagged eventually? can you re-write this sentence?
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