The illustrations show how chocolate is produced

Essay topics:

The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.

The picture depicts a detailed description of how to make chocolate

In general, the procedure for producing chocolate goes through 10 steps, beginning with cacao trees being grown in America, Africa, and Indonesia and culminating with chocolate beans being inner part pressed.

The first step is that cacao trees are planted in America, Africa, and Indonesia. By this stage, the farmer picks the cocoa beans and splits them to get the beans. At the same time, farmers will bring the beans to ferment. The next step is when the beans have finished incubation the staff will continue to bring the beans to dry.

Following this, the seeds will be divided into large sacks. Once this particular stage in the process has been completed, the sacks will be transported to the factory by train or truck. At the factory, the beans will be roasted above 350 degrees. In the next steps, the beans will be brought to the crusher and the outer shell removed. Eventually, the bean's inner part is pressed to make chocolate.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8901734104 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37696689069 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.3008688724 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812871406394 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022015258469 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660457754069 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864140075625 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895663095672 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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