the information below gives the details about household income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in one UK in 2010 and 2013
The given table reveals the information of household total earnings together with their expenditure on food and clothes of an UK middle-class family in two years,2010 and 2013 . Besides, the pie charts illustrated the proportion of spending on different types of food and clothes in the same time.
Overall, while income per household witnessed a decrease in 2013, the spending on food and clothes was increased. In addition, the rate of money spent on meat and fish was highest in 2010, that of fruits and vegetables replaced this position in 2013.
It is obviously seen in the table that there was a significant fall by 4000 pounds from 2010 to 2013. Despite this overall decline, expenditure on food and clothes slightly rose from 14000 pounds in 2010 to 15000 pounds in 2013.
In term of spending on food, in 2010, the largest spending belonged to meat and fish with 20%. However, this position was replaced by fruits and vegetables with far greater proportion at 35%. In a sharp contrast, the percentage of expenditure for dairy products was smallest in total with 15% in 2010. This figure steadily grew reaching 20% in 2013. In addition, the amount of money for other food and drinks remained unchanged in both two years.
Among the total spending for food and clothes, the ratio of expenditure for clothes in 2010 was 22% which nearly doubled than that in 2013 when it became smallest proportion in total spending for food and clothes with 12%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: .
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'became the smallest'.
Suggestion: became the smallest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56912624657 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495967741935 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4584764473 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304354259394 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118301230579 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896345323117 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190216060541 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732133491637 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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