Internet users

Essay topics:

Internet users

The table and the bar chart present the number of internet users in 7 regions in 2000 and in 2010, as well as the internet penetration there. Overall, all the regions showed growth of different extent, while penetration is the highest in developed regions and lower in developing ones.

Looking first at the numbers of internet users, all the regions, except for Latin America (which only added two mln people by 2010), show considerable growth. Africa and the Middle East experience the highest growth (both of almost by 20 times). The number of Asian users also shows a raise, changing from 114 to 825 mln people, which constitutes almost half of all the users worldwide. The remaining three regions (Europe, North America, Oceania, and Australia) also show a raise, by three to four times.

Now moving on to internet penetration, North America has the highest rate (approximately 80 percent). Europe, Oceania, and Australia have the second-highest penetration, both reaching around 60 percent. Latin America, the Middle East and Asia’s rates vary from 35 to 22 percent. The lowest penetration was recorded in Africa (only 10 percent).

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, well, while, except for, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69785889077 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2636745951 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214069140154 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081565959224 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127164603239 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150744521234 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780887398728 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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