It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open, in your opinion?
Museums are reflection of our history. It also includes artwork and many inspiration events which keep the youth connected to their heritage. To address these challenges, various reforms can be suggested. I believe that having a visitor fees and allocating a certain part of the museum for the extra activities like arts display or conducting seminars will add extra revenue to maintain the operations.
Firstly, increasing the charges or having the minimum fees will allow to look after the operations like employee salaries, maintenance charges and other charges like electricity and water. If these expenses are taken care then operation can run without hindrance. For instance, there are certain museums in India like “Sikh heritage in Punjab” which was constructed with a budget of very high amount in 1996. In year 2000, government could not maintain its operation due to higher maintenance charges. Consequently administration fixed the visitor fees enabling the government to be in better financial position to look after its maintenance costs.
Secondly, in an era of having multiple activities on a premises to boost the business. Similarly, museum can also boast of having certain areas to be rented for extra activities like allowing the display of arts or granting permission to conduct the seminars. This will act as precaursor to be more economical for the museum authorities to have an extra profit . It may be highly likely that authorities can possibly expand the museum which can attract more visitors. For example, after the appointment of newly appointed chief minister in New Delhi in India, he had paid the visits to the museum and granted the approval to the administration to allow the extra activities for various cultural programs and seminars
To sum up, in-order to make the museum accessible to everyone. It is imperative to increase the visitor fees and to have extra activities in museum premises which are chargeable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 965.302439024 172% => OK
No of words: 313.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31948881789 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88889842446 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 283.868780488 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.812640188 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70975609756 350% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15336949075 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05659282479 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356100195685 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977993668812 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028064556937 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 40.7170731707 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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