When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks and sports facilities, rather than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Building town can be a difficult process, especially designing the lay out to build the parks and public facilities or shopping centers. Although, Shopping centers helps in reducing the traffic jam and creates the job avenues, I believe that parks helps in developing a sense of community and sports facilities allow people to develop health life style.
Shopping centers helps in saving the time of people and creates employments opportunities. Because if shopping centers are not located in central place then people may have to commute to far- away places by modes of transport like cars or buses, in turn putting a strain on road infrastructure, In that case, cities may have to suffer a gridlock. Besides this, In India, in my town New-Delhi, shopping centers houses a large number of grocery stores and food cuisines. Therefore managers have to recruit a large number of youngsters. That’s why these shopping centers also creates job opportunities too.
On the other side, Parks are places where people can exercise and foster a sense of community. Parks having facilities like barbecue and exercise machines provide an ambience for people to cook and gather in their close groups and encourage old as well as young people to exercise. Sports facilities act as catalyst for people to have better healthy life-style. For example, In India, in my town, in the centrally located football ground, people can be seen playing friendly match on weekends. Moreover school-going children are often reminded after seeing this ground that it is important to engage in the physical activity
Even though shopping centers helps in reducing the traffic- jams and increase the job opportunities, in order to have amicable environment in the community, it is imperative to construct parks and sports facilities allows an individual to develop a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28762541806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80655218365 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.4936799768 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229426758354 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892260033465 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422109445574 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136430861621 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347903038959 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.