It is Better For Children to Begin Learning a Foreign Language at Primary School than Secondary School
Nowadays, some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. In this essay I completely disagree because it gives more disadvantage than advantage for some reasons.
It is important to do not force the children to learn a lot of things at primary school. That is because primary school is place where should be happy places for them. In some cases, the children who study a lot of things can be antisocial because there is no time for them to play with their friends. As a result that children have more high level of stress rather than the children who do not take to much lessons. Primary school should be care about play and lesson balance for the children.
But, on the other hand learning foreign language at secondary school it can be hardest for children. Because they unusually did that before so it takes more effort to better their understanding. For example in some secondary school expected the student for taking english course additional outside of the school. So, their parents must have extra money for paid the courses cost.
So in my opinion, primary school should be place for the children to learning something new without stress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92924528302 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42158987932 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3996217726 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0833333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.576365298369 0.215688989381 267% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238165427149 0.103423049105 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20582962726 0.0843802449381 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.386168684986 0.15604864568 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122544935627 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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