Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.

Essay topics: Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.

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Today's word is very fast and changing due to which now people do not have much time to do shopping and they want to get each and every thing from one place.Because due to lack of time they don't want to roam here and there.

But in Some prospective shopping mall is good as if a person is new to the place and he is not aware of local market then he can easily get the address of a mall from internet and he can take the daily use necessary things.Also in mall any one can found each thing start from the electronic item to food to cloth every thing.

If we talk about the good thing of local market the from there we can get the fresh material as In the local market people harvest the thing and then buy .Thus if some one want to take fresh vegetable or fruit then he should go to local market rather than shopping mall.

As a result we can say both things have their benefit its upto you, how we can utilize it in our daily routine.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Because
...get each and every thing from one place.Because due to lack of time they dont want to r...
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Suggestion: Also
...can take the daily use necessary things.Also in mall any one can found each thing st...
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Suggestion: anyone
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...about the good thing of local market the from there we can get the fresh material...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'as a result']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20942408377 0.268076937826 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.151832460733 0.116061578633 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0942408376963 0.0759168565197 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0628272251309 0.0366838410393 171% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0785340314136 0.0131127313244 599% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104712041885 0.155750635184 67% => OK
Participles: 0.0157068062827 0.0379272487307 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 1.98377626023 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0523560209424 0.0210936926555 248% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104712041885 0.0948980150116 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0366492146597 0.00437022459523 839% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104712041885 0.00967000014798 108% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 943.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.9 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06989247312 5.90752243213 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.172043010753 0.337110787985 51% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.0913978494624 0.247514529752 37% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0698924731183 0.171178102325 41% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0322580645161 0.112407865282 29% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 1.98377626023 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 45.8668950026 49.3433353143 93% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 8.93414634146 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.5 23.0094962315 202% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1484964667 42.9750493124 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 235.75 135.714022679 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.5 23.0094962315 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.75 0.689975730869 254% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.48048780488 675% => OK
Readability: 55.6397849462 47.7609492067 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.125 2.94281807926 38% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0416197085234 0.418131533498 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.304565834739 0.181151798455 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.165074805722 0.0850326197045 194% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.57009245868e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252414250905 0.228904883108 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170279273956 0.108899403657 16% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275312171532 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.158967206494 0.0812612215331 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0252414250905 0.316326947829 8% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170279273956 0.0921553760075 18% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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