Leisure activities of europian adults
The given pie charts reveal information about several hobbies that usually have by a grown-up European
in 1985 and 1995. Overall, in both years, watching television became the most popular leisure activity
that mature people do in Europe.
In 1985, as many as 23% of European adults are prefer to going outside and having a meal in their free
time. Beside that, around one quarter of them like to have a chit chat with their friends and for 18% of
the oldest population enjoy talking with their families. Along with it, only 6% of them are having others
hobbies.
After a decade, there are significant changes about popular leisure activities that European adults like to
do. Even though 30% of them still thinking that watching TV is the most favorite leisure activities, there
are a new hobby that significantly became popular, playing computer games. In this year, more than one
quarter of the European adults like to do this activity. All tough talking with friends still in being the third
most enjoyed activity, but the habit to talk to families in free time decreasing to 7%. In 1995’s another
declining trend comes to the hobby of eating outside to 8% and only 2% like doing other hobbies.
To conclude, even though watching TV become the most enjoyable hobbies in those years, in 1995 there
are a new leisure activities that dramatically appear as their hobby compared to 1985’s.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
..., as many as 23% of European adults are prefer to going outside and having a meal in t...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'go'?
Suggestion: go
...as 23% of European adults are prefer to going outside and having a meal in their free...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 11, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hobbies'?
Suggestion: hobbies
...te leisure activities, there are a new hobby that significantly became popular, play...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 19, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...years, in 1995 there are a new leisure activities that dramatically appear as their hobby...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98319327731 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45950179333 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6526095811 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167144307367 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717822411922 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885860159453 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648148048636 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938414137623 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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